With the development of science and society,culture change ang develop,become more colorhul .For example, foreign festivals turning popular in china.…………
Generation gap is a usual problem.As children grow up ,parents get older ,generation gap
come up.And as time goes by,it becomes more and more serious .…………
There is no doubt that,"Failure is the mother of success."Success is fair, everyone has a chance to succeed, and the key depends on how to seize this opportunity.…………
不知道這樣可不可以。
(一)段首句 1. 關于……人們有不同的觀點。
一些人認為…… There are different opinions among people as to ____ .Some people suggest that ____. 2. 俗話說(常言道)……,它是我們前輩的經歷,但是,即使在今天,它在許多場合仍然適用。 There is an old saying______. It's the experience of our forefathers,however,it is correct in many cases even today. 3. 現在,……,它們給我們的日常生活帶來了許多危害。
首先,……;其次,……。更為糟糕的是…… Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First, ____ Second,____.What makes things worse is that______. 4. 現在,……很普遍,許多人喜歡……,因為……,另外(而且)……。
Nowadays, it is common to ______. Many people like ______ because ______.Besides,______. 5. 任何事物都是有兩面性,……也不例外。它既有有利的一面,也有不利的一面。
Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception,it has both advantages and disadvantages. 6. 關于……人們的觀點各不相同,一些人認為(說)……,在他們看來,…… People's opinions about ______ vary from person to person. Some people say that ______.To them,_____. 7. 人類正面臨著一個嚴重的問題……,這個問題變得越來越嚴重。 Man is now facing a big problem ______ which is becoming more and more serious. 8. ……已成為人的關注的熱門話題,特別是在年青人當中,將引發(fā)激烈的辯論。
______ has become a hot topic among people,especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way. 9. ……在我們的日常生活中起著越來越重要的作用,它給我們帶來了許多好處,但同時也引發(fā)一些嚴重 的問題。 ______ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well. 10. 根據圖表/數字/統計數字/表格中的百分比/圖表/條形圖/成形圖可以看出……。
很顯然……,但是 為什么呢? According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph,it can be seen that ______ while. Obviously, ______, but why? (二)中間段落句 1. 相反,有一些人贊成……,他們相信……,而且,他們認為……。 On the contrary, there are some people in favor of ___.At the same time, they say____. 2. 但是,我認為這不是解決……的好方法,比如……。
最糟糕的是……。 But I don't think it is a very good way to solve ____.For example,____.Worst of all,___. 3. ……對我們國家的發(fā)展和建設是必不可少的,(也是)非常重要的。
首先,……。而且……,最重要 的是…… ______is necessary and important to our country's development and construction. First,______. What's more, _____.Most important of all,______. 4. 有幾個可供我們采納的方法。
首先,我們可以……。 There are several measures for us to adopt. First, we can______ 5. 面臨……,我們應該采取一系列行之有效的方法來……。
一方面……,另一方面, Confronted with______, we should take a series of effective measures to______. For one thing,______For another, ______ 6. 早就應該拿出行動了。比如說……,另外……。
所有這些方法肯定會……。 It is high time that something was done about it. For example. _____.In addition. _____.All these measures will certainly______. 7. 為什么……?第一個原因是……;第二個原因是……;第三個原因是……。
總的來說,……的主要原 因是由于…… Why______? The first reason is that ______.The second reason is ______.The third is ______.For all this, the main cause of ______due to ______. 8. 然而,正如任何事物都有好壞兩個方面一樣,……也有它的不利的一面,象……。 However, just like everything has both its good and bad sides, ______also has its own disadvantages, such as ______. 9. 盡管如此,我相信……更有利。
Nonetheless, I believe that ______is more advantageous. 10. 完全同意……這種觀點(陳述),主要理由如下:I fully agree with the statement that ______ because______. (三)結尾句 1. 至于我,在某種程度上我同意后面的觀點,我認為…… As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion to some extent. I think that …… 2. 總而言之,整個社會應該密切關注……這個問題。只有這樣,我們才能在將來……。
In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ……Only in this way can ……in the future. 3. 但是,……和……都有它們各自的優(yōu)勢(好處)。例如,……,而……。
然而,把這兩者相比較,我更傾向于(喜歡)……But ……and……h(huán)ave heir own advantages. For example, …… while…… Comparing this with that, however, I prefer to…… 4. 就我個人而言,我相信……,因此,我堅信美好的未來正等著我們。因為…… Personally, I believe that…… Consequently, I'm confident 。
1.Our life should safe and healthy。。..so we must protect our city。
2.The city is dity ,what should we do?。。.now we must save our world.
3.Sport is very important for us。。..let us to do sport everyday.
5.Yesterday ,I had a pleasant trip with my parents。。.we also had a good time。
6.My hobby is reading books。。I think hobby could makes me to be a good child。
7.My best friend is sally。。.i think she would be my best friend in my life。
9.Yangliwei is a heroes in the china。。..I'll remember him in my heart。
11.English is my most favourite subject。。i must learn it well
12.i want to be a nurse。。.let's me study hard and to be a good nurse。
14.my school is so funny。。..my classmates are very kind of me。
有些編不出來了
萬能開頭 一篇文章通常可分為三個部分,即開頭、正文和結尾。
這三個部分安排是否得體,直接影響到文章的質量。 文章的開頭一般來說應盡量做到開門見山,用簡單明白的敘述引出文章的話題,使讀者了解文章要談論什么,一下于引起讀者的興趣。
作文常見的開頭形式大致有以下幾種: 1.開門見山,揭示主題 文章一開頭,就交待清楚文章的主題是什么。如“How I Spent My Vacation”(我怎樣度假)的開頭是: I Spent my last vacation happily. 下面是題為"Honesty"(談誠實)一文中的開頭:Honesty is one of the best virtues.An honest man is always trusted and respected.On the contrary, one who tells lies is regarded as a "liar",and is looked upon by honest people. 2.交代人物、事情、時間或環(huán)境開頭 在文章的開頭,先把人物、事件和環(huán)境交待清楚。
例如"A Trip to Jinshan" (去金山旅游)的開頭: The day before yesterday my class went on a bus trip to Jinshan. The bus ride there took three hours. The long trip made us very tired, but the sight of the beautiful sea refreshed us. 3. 回憶性的開頭 用回憶的方法來開頭。例如"A Trip to the Taishan Mountain"(泰山游)的開頭是: I remember my first trip to the Taishan Mountain as if it were yesterday. 4.概括性的開頭 即對要在文章中敘述的人或事先作一個概括性的介紹。
如“The Happiness of Reading Books”(讀書的快樂)的開頭: People often say that gold and silver are the most valuable things in the world. But I say that to read books is more valuable than anything else, because books give us knowledge and knowledge gives us power. 5.介紹環(huán)境式的開頭 即開頭利用自然景物或自然環(huán)境引出要介紹的事物。如“An Accident”(一場事故)的開頭是: It was a rainy and windy morning. The sky was gloomy, the temperature was low, and the street was nearly empty. I was on my way back to school. Suddenly, a speeding car came round the corner. 6.交待寫作目的的開頭。
在文章的一開頭就交待寫作目的,如通過文章要表揚誰,批評誰,或說明一個什么問題等。如 "Pollution Control" (控制污染)的開頭: In this article I shall draw your attention to the subject of pollution control. 萬能結尾 1.活動類. Never before has xxx活動 been concerned much as it is today ! As far as I am concerned , it is high time we did something useful to improve ………… 2.好壞對比 Although every coin has its two sides, I think there are more advantages than disadvantages to cancel the long May Day holiday and shorten it into only one day. 3.父母幫助子女/老師幫助學生 As the old saying goes, “To give a man a fish, and you feed him for a day; to teach a man to fish, and you feed him for a lifetime”. As far as I'm concerned, parents should help their children to adapt themselves to society rather than shelter them from what's going on outside. 4. 關注家鄉(xiāng),關注國家的發(fā)展 Personally, I am sure we can see that China/ my hometown is getting richer and stronger and the people in our /my hometown /country will surely enjoy a happy life if all the measures above are to be taken effectively. 5. 感恩活動的意義/ I think this is a meaningful activity, which teaches us to learn to have gratitude for the people around us. Being grateful to others is a good feeling. With it we can know how to respect our parents, the elders and teachers. With it we can learn to care for others and forgive others. Only when we are always keeping a grateful heart to others can we harvest well-being and happiness. 6.社會公益活動的意義 From my point of view, xx活動 is obviously more than just learning; furthermore, it is helpful to broaden our horizon and improve our understanding of the world. That's why I'd like to take this opportunity and make the most of my special talents and interests. By doing so, I feel I can make a small contribution to society. 7.學生健康 1. To improve students' health, we call for less homework. Only in this way can students get plenty of sleep and meanwhile prevent themselves from being nearsighted. Poorer diets and exercise should also be paid attention to so that they won't easily put on weight. With their heavy burdens removed, students can then keep in normal mental health. 學生健康 2. As far as I am concerned, we students should balance our physical exercise and studies. Just like a saying goes: “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy,” without a sound body, one cannot achieve anything. However, too much attention has been paid only to studies. Therefore, I suggest we be given less homework and more time for out-of-classroom activities to solve all the problems. Only in this way can we lead a healthy life 8.環(huán)保類 As far as I am concerned , it is high time we did 。
Nowadays, (overpopulation) has become a problem we have to face.如今,(人口過剩)已成為我們不得不面對的問題了.It is commonly believed that … / It is a common belief that … 人們一般認為…… Many people insist that … 很多人堅持認為…… With the development of science and technology, more and more people believe that… 隨著科技的發(fā)展,越來越多的人認為…… A lot of people seem to think that … 很多人似乎認為…… 引出不同觀點:People's views on … vary from person to person. Some hold that …. However, others believe that….人們對……的觀點因人而異.有些人認為……,然而其他人卻認為…… People may have different opinions on …人們對……可能會有不同的見解.Attitudes towards (drugs) vary from person to person.人們對待吸毒的態(tài)度因人而異.There are different opinions among people as to …關于……,人們的觀點大不相同.Different people hold different attitudes toward (failure). 對(失敗)人們的態(tài)度各不相同。
結尾 Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to the conclusion that… 把所有這些因素加以考慮,我們自然會得出結論…… Taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that … 考慮所有這些因素,我們可能會得出合理的結論…… Hence/Therefore, we'd better come to the conclusion that … 因此,我們最好得出這樣的結論…… There is no doubt that (job-hopping) has its drawbacks as well as merits.毫無疑問,跳槽有優(yōu)點也有缺點.All in all, we cannot live without … But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.總之,我們沒有…是無法生活的.但同時,我們必須尋求新的解決辦法來對付可能出現的新問題.提出建議:It is high time that we put an end to the (trend).該是我們停止這一趨勢的時候了.It is time to take the advice of … and to put special emphasis on the improvement of … 該是采納……的建議,并對……的進展給予特殊重視的時候了。There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of … 毫無疑問,對……問題應予以足夠的重視.Obviously, … If we want to do something … , it is essential that … 顯然,如果我們想做某事,很重要的是… Only in this way can we … 只有這樣,我們才能…… It must be realized that …我們必須意識到……。
首先提醒你,不同的文章有不同的開頭的,不過呢,長點的是吧,很懶惰哦……嘻嘻,給你兩端寡人珍藏萬金油式的段落,我給你分開吧,你自己看著寫。
開頭:1 Nowadays more and more people begin to realize(be aware of ,notice) the importance(significance,seriousness)of the problem of XXX (現在越來越多的人開始意識到XXX的重要性) 2 With the rapid development of economy,great changes have taken place in…………(隨著經濟快速的發(fā)展,XXX發(fā)生了巨大的變化) 3 Thanks to China's reform and opening-up policy,XXX havewitnessed great economic and social progress in the past two decades飛(由于中國的改革開放政策,XXX在過去的二十年里見證了巨大的社會經濟進步) 結尾:1 Both governments and ordinary citizens should join hands to make this world a better place to live in, not only for ourselves,but also for future generations.(F不僅僅是為了我們,更是為了我們的后代,政府和普通公民應該聯合起來,是這個世界變成更美好的家園。) 2 Taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to the moral that……(全盤考慮所有的因素,我們可以得出這樣的教訓……) 3 It is urgent that appropriate actions betaken to end…………(采取適當的措施去遏制……是迫切的)。
If you have received possibly have the earthquake warning, continues to maintain listens to the local broadcasting station newest report and the suggestion, like the suggestion switches off the liquid gas, the power source. Greatly but the heavy object from high will put on to take away. The jar, the glass, the chinaware and other brittle things admit in the low cabinet, the baggage shelf should have keeps off the hand by to prevent the object whereabouts. The cabinet gate should shut tightly, moves away to be hanging the object. Below prepares the goods by to prepare urgently needs: Fresh fresh water and emergency food, flashlight, fire extinguisher. Is far away these possibly to fall is pounding your thing, possibly can eradicate in outdoors trees, in the small town construction even if enough is sturdy cannot destroy, the chippings also possibly fall. Runs away spacious to place most ideal, but if does not have the enough time,stays is possibly safer in the room, on the avenue speech, the gas piping or the electric wire which bursts can increase the risk. Passes in and out the human is most dangerous, extremely easily is wounded by the building in bricks and stones. In room: When the earthquake occurs, if in the indoors, stays in inside, extinguishes the fire, is far away the glass is specially the big window (including mirror and so on). In the room quoin or has the good strut internal way is good seeking asylum place. Perhaps the low ground or the basement can provide the best survival opportunity. Hides in under the table bottom or other firm furniture, this not only can provide the protection to you, moreover also has the big breath space. When store, is far away the big cargo exhibition hall, these cargos possibly can drop down. Also is loaded with the elevator in the multilayered building in the office, in-situ hides in the desk bottom. Do not enter the elevator, the staircase also possibly can crowd the panic-stricken people. . Che Zhong: As far as possible quickly and safely stops - but stays in the vehicle may avoid hit by the whereabouts object. Crouches in hiding under the seat, if has the thing to fall on the vehicle, you will be able to obtain the protection. When vibrates stops down, the attention observation obstacle and possibly appears danger: Destroyed the electric cable, damages the path and collapses bridge. Outdoors: When outdoors lie in the ground, do not have to run. This can throw down, also possibly is embezzled by the crack. Is far away the big construction. Toward derground walk or do not enter the gallery, this can cause to be stranded. Like you already prepared to the outdoors, did not return to in the building. The earthquake causes any construction not too to be all reliable for the first time, if then again occurs slightly shakes, the building can cave in. Is safer to the summit. In the pitch earth stone is easy to fall, if crushes by the number thousand ton heavy soil block or the rock (they to have fearful speed), very little has the opportunity which fortunately survives. Rolls equally on the place like the ball changes the survival. Beach place: So long as under the cliff cannot the suitable security, but because the tsunami follows the earthquake but to come frequently, therefore after vibrates stops leaving the beach as soon as possible to the higher open field shift. The aftershock risk did not like the tsunami to be so fearful.。
一般來說應該背一點精彩的句式放在開頭用以吸引閱卷老師的注意力,
讓他對你有一個比較好的第一印象,
在最后結分的時候把你的分數向上靠
(不要小看這一靠,有時候1分就是天壤之別!)
但總體基本以簡單句為主,
不要顯得太過于注重華麗的詞藻,
當然如果你的水平足夠隨意使用復合句的話就沒有這點條條框框,
主要是因為如果你的水平不到家,
容易出現語法或句式的錯誤更加令閱卷老師討厭。
樓上的兄弟說的完全不正確!
英語的作文也是和語文一樣按評分標準打分的,
不是只要語法對就好,
舉一個高考評分標準為例:
1. 本題總分為25分,按5個檔次給分。
2. 評分時,先根據文章的內容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次,然后以該檔次
的要求來衡量,確定或調整檔次,最后給分。
3. 詞數少于 80和多于 120的,從總分中減去2分。
4. 評分時,應注意的主要內容為:內容要點、應用詞匯和語法結構的數量和準確性、上下文的連貫性及語言的得體性。
5. 拼寫與標點符號是語言準確性的一個方面,評分時,應視其對交際的影 響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫漢詞匯用法均可接受。 6. 如書寫較差,以至影響交際,將分數降低一個檔次。
7. 內容要點可用不同方式表達,對緊扣主題的適當發(fā)揮不予扣分。
【各檔次的給分范圍和要求】
第五檔(很好);(21-25分)
1. 完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務。
2. 覆蓋所有內容要點。
3. 應用了較多的語法結構和詞匯。
4. 語法結構或詞匯方面有些許錯誤,但為盡力使用較復雜結構或較高級詞匯所致;具備較強的語言運用能力。
5. 有效地使用了語句間的連接成分,使全文結構緊湊。
6. 完全達到了預期的寫作目的。
第四檔(好):(16-20分)
1. 完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務。
2. 雖漏掉1、2個次重點,但覆蓋所有主要內容。
3. 應用的語法結構和詞匯能滿足任務的要求。
4. 語法結構或詞匯方面應用基本準確,些許錯誤主要是因嘗試較復雜語法結構或詞匯所致。
5. 應用簡單的語句間的連接成分,使全文結構緊湊。
6. 達到了預期的寫作目的。
第三檔(適當):(11-15分)
1. 基本完成了試題規(guī)定的任務。
2. 雖漏掉一些內容,但覆蓋所有主要內容。
3. 應用的語法結構和詞匯能滿足任務的要求。
4. 有一些語法結構或詞匯方面的錯誤,但不影響理解。
5. 應用簡單的語句間的連接成分,使全文內容連貫。
6. 整體而言,基本達到了預期的寫作目的。
第二檔(較差):(6-10分)
1. 未恰當完成試題規(guī)定的任務。
2. 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要內容,寫了一些無關內容。
3. 語法結構單調、詞匯項目有限。
4. 有一些語法結構或詞匯方面的錯誤,影響了對寫作內容的理解。
5. 較少使用語句間的連接成分,內容缺少連貫性。
6. 信息未能清楚地傳達給讀者。
第一檔(差):(1-5分)
1. 未完成試題規(guī)定的任務。
2. 明顯遺漏主要內容,寫了一些無關內容,原因可能是未理解試題要求。
3. 語法結構單調、詞匯項目有限。
4. 較多語法結構或詞匯方面的錯誤,影響對寫作內容的理解。
5. 缺乏語句間的連接成分,內容不連貫。
6. 信息未能傳達給讀者。
不得分:(0分)
未能傳達給讀者仟何信息:內容太少,無法評判;寫的內容均與所要求內容無關或所寫內容無法看清。
可能是你用的開頭是已經用爛的那種啦,
網上找找很多很好的開頭的。
開頭 with the development of the modern society, more and more。, some people hold that。, however, some others hold that。., in my view of point,。
.結尾 in sum, there is no denying the fact that。。only in this way can we 。
此格式最適用于寫議論文了,呵呵 希望對你能有所幫助。
1. 開頭萬能公式一:名人名言
有人問了,“我沒有記住名言,怎么辦?尤其是英語名言?”,很好辦:編!
原理:我們看到的東西很多都是創(chuàng)造出來的,包括我們欣賞的文章也是,所以盡管編,但是一定要聽起來很有道理呦!而且沒準將來我們就是名人呢!對吧?
經典句型:
a proberb says, “ you are only young once.” (適用于已記住的名言)
it goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. (適用于自編名言)
更多經典句型:as everyone knows, no one can deny that…
2. 開頭萬能公式二:數字統計
原理:要想更有說服力,就應該用實際的數字來說明。
原則上在議論文當中十不應該出現虛假數字的,可是在考試的時候哪管那三七二十一,但編無妨,只要我有東西寫就萬事大吉了。所以不妨試用下面的句型:
according to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.
看起來這個數字文鄒鄒的,其實都是編造出來的,下面隨便幾個題目我們都可以這樣編造:
honesty
根據最近的一項統計調查顯荊
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